America? by A.Filth
Posted: 18 July 2008 01:44 AM   [ Ignore ]  
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This is no complex political statement poem, this is no revolutionary call to action, there are no big words or literary devices to modify it, this is simply a thought from an American, not an American poet, just a simple American, one who has no political ties, none of that bollocks.

I’m only 25, I know I’m not the most intelligent man on Earth, but I have tried my hardest to learn what I can every day, I appreciate history, I’m thankful for science and I read comics

I wrote this today on a piece of paper while looking at the sea, stuck it in my pocket, and came home…

I’ve always come back to TC, I have good friends here, good times, alot of laughs and most of all it takes me away from my current position, Long Beach California…

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We’re running out of money…

It all goes to gas and food,

Water is scarce, and people don’t realize it because they’re too busy paying for gas.

We’re just trying to live,

Stores and local businesses are closing every day, even the fuckin banks, crime is everywhere and jobs are hard to come by…

Houses cost a shitload, food costs a shitload, gas costs a shitload and we all don’t have that much…

I see it getting worse everyday, and many people don’t even notice, and if they did, they probably wouldn’t even care…

I feel like my country is going into a type of depression or something…

I have no idea how to improve, I’m already trying my hardest, I take money to my parents, I work all day and night and I feel like its not good enough…

“Whats going to happen to America?

Whats going to happen to its people?”

My family?”

Sometimes I can’t help but think…

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[ Edited: 31 July 2008 10:04 AM by AtomicFilth]
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Posted: 18 July 2008 01:49 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]  
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We’ll be your surrogate family Atomic

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Posted: 18 July 2008 01:57 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]  
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Straight from the heart,stream of conciousness prose-poetry.Kudos wink

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Posted: 18 July 2008 02:57 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]  
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awesome that was awesome man…the cruel reality of this country…all true

im afraid of how we will end…and on how this country will end

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Posted: 18 July 2008 08:22 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]  
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The future of your country is in your hands.
I know it sounds like worn out phrase, but it`s true.

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Posted: 18 July 2008 08:49 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 5 ]  
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Tv won’t tell you all that,
thats for sure
Well written

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Posted: 18 July 2008 09:38 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 6 ]  
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AtomicFilth - 18 July 2008 01:44 AM

I’m only 25, I know I’m not the most intelligent man on Earth, but I have tried my hardest to learn what I can every day, I appreciate history, I’m thankful for science and I read comics

Never be ashamed that you read comics. They keep passion and imagination alive. The worlds media runs out of idea, where does it look…comics thats where!

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Posted: 28 July 2008 09:33 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 7 ]  
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Thats a shitload of reality. Nice A-Filth.

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